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The experimental and nonconformist ideologues of post-modernism, building upon the iconoclasts of the modernist period, viewed structure to be a needlessly restrictive and sentimental burden imposed on art throughout history and distrusted the blind faith in more ubiquitous structures such as language itself. At the same time, this view was accompanied by a parodic fascination with the stylistic and narrative impacts of those structures, which could be used to interrogate themselves reflexively. The most renowned post-modernists, from Andy Warhol and David Lynch to Vladimir Nabokov, used pastiche to reinvigorate pre-existing structures with new meanings, innovating formal qualities to reshape understandings of language and representation. This is most evidently exhibited in Nabokov's 1962 novel Pale Fire, a pastiche imitation of literary commentary, which utilises its tripartite meta-structure of Foreword, Poem, and Commentary to gradually alter the reader's understanding of the reliability of its editor, Charles Kinbote, and the nature of language itself.
Nabokov opens the novel with a foreword that simultaneously introduces the narrator, Kinbote, and hints at his pretensions and the potential illegitimacies of his claims. The foreword orients the reader into the structure of literary commentary through its first-person narrative perspective, advanced diction, and scholarly tone – but Nabokov uses these structural expectations to examine the extent to which the narrative perspective can be exaggerated before the conventional style of the book collapses. Alternating between a sober exposition of the poem the book commentates ("Pale Fire", by murdered poet John Shade), and sporadic ruptures of scholarly distance, the Foreword intends to develop nascent doubts in the reader towards the faithfulness of Nabokov's structure and instantiate the theme of unreliable narration. After describing Shade's writing process using literary jargon "He marked his cards not with the date of his final adjustments, but with that of his Corrected Draft or first Fair Copy", Kinbote abruptly interjects with the sentence "There is a very loud amusement park right in front of my present lodgings." The departure from scholarly distance created by the direct reference to Kinbote's situation introduces the employment of juxtaposition which abounds throughout the novel, and garners its effectiveness directly from the reader's preconceived ideas of the text's structure. The degree of familiarity Kinbote creates through the juxtaposition in the foreword is deemed inappropriate for scholarly discourse, and signals early on the interpretative misconduct and authorial intrusions prevalent in the Commentary. Importantly, however, Nabokov does not foreground this but chooses to subtly introduce it through hints at Kinbote's narcissism ("the competence, and perhaps honesty, of its present editor and narrator") and extensive, visibly exaggerated accounts of his friendship with Shade. Nabokov's structural choices question the notion of identity throughout the novel as Kinbote's perspective gradually becomes more claustrophobic and the reader is left uncertain of the true nature of the world beyond Kinbote's descriptions. All of this is achieved utilising a degree of juxtaposition and first-person narration, both in quantity and quality, that capitalises on the reader's notions of the structural role of a Foreword to shape the reader's understanding of the appropriate attitude of scepticism with which the rest of the book must be read.
This structural confusion is exacerbated by the Commentary segment, which expands the usage of juxtaposition to the macrostructural level, increasing the reader's understanding of the disparity between what Kinbote says about Shade, and what Shade actually writes. In the table of contents, the Commentary is placed last "in conformity with custom", but the final paragraph of the Foreword instructs the reader to consult the Commentary before the Poem, since "without [Kinbote's] notes, Shade's text has no human reality." On a purely formal level, the structural importance of Kinbote's commentary is understood through the conjunction of quotation and first person perspective, by which they are convoked to reveal Kinbote's patent disinterest with the text proper of Shade's poem, and heavy interest in narrating the story of his own life. This is seen as the quotations which Kinbote 'commentates' get progressively shorter and less related to the commentary he writes on them. He finds increasingly tenuous connections to his (likely deluded) experience as the overthrown king of a foreign nation, Zembla. At his note to Line 130 he quotes the line "I never bounced a ball or swung a bat" by misinterpreting the American poet's reference to basketball and baseball by stating "Frankly, I too never excelled in soccer and cricket," before launching into a 10-page description of this king's reign. Since he refuses to reveal this identity, referring to the king in the third person, the narrative perspective takes on a different significance than the Foreword. As Kinbote imposes his first-person perspective into the life of Shade, unwittingly displaying his fanatical obsession with the poet, he deposes it from his actual experience, which he commentates on from the third person. For example, in his note to line 433, quoting Shade's "to the sea… which we had visited in thirty-three," Kinbote immediately sidelines his role as commentator, since he "is not in the possession of the particulars", and instead states the ages of the former Zemblan King (himself) and Queen in 1933, segueing into a 9-page description of their flight after the coup. This structural reversal of narrative perspective represents the core theme of the novel, Kinbote's attempt to mythologise himself and his own story, to which he subjugates Shade's story throughout the poem. The disjunction between the quotations from the poem and the self-centred descriptions of the commentator are a representation of the poet's disdain at the complete lack of Kinbote's story in Shade's poem, contravening his belief that he had 'given [Shade] the subject for his poem,' referring to his homeland, Zembla, and the story of its king. By ultimately perverting the structure of a commentary into an autobiography (disguised as a biography), Kinbote represents to the reader his ultimate goal of fulfilling his own narcissism and delusions of grandeur, completing their understanding of the formal subversion in Nabokov's structure. By gradually destabilising certainty in the reliability of the narrator, Nabokov imparts the post-modern scepticism of language and appearance onto his own readers by forcing them to traverse the structure of a text that demands scepticism by its very themes and character(s).
The most crucial part to this understanding is the realisation that by the very nature of this structure, the Poem is essentially jettisoned from structural significance. The narcissism of the commentator foregrounds his own story by misinterpreting Shade's poem to a degree that renders it incommensurable with the rest of the novel. Kinbote's instruction in the foreword forces the reader to skip the central section of the structure precisely because it becomes irrelevant once the reader realises the purpose of the author's structural devices. Nabokov not only destabilises the notion of 'beginning' and 'ending' in the structure of a novel, but he challenges the idea that portions of that structure must be read at all, depicting the ideological nature of expression and establishing a distrust for language and structure in line with post-modern ideology. The reader's understanding is formed throughout the text precisely by navigating this structural confusion since every formal disruption and structural subversion is revelatory of the character and motivations of its editor, Kinbote, and the degree to which such meta-structures are fallible.
